Friday, March 7, 2008

Project 2, UCM 1

30 comments:

theglowingbriefcase said...

This presentation was successful because it was cohesive and I could follow it easily. I liked how it gave both definitions and examples at appropriate moments so it was easy to go from one slide to another. One thing that could be improved is the explanations of the formulas, they could be more in depth. The presentation did follow the how to correctly because the slides were uncluttered and understandable.

John Smith said...

Your powerpoint presentation was very good. You used colors well but didn't overdo them to the point that they were distracting. My one suggestion is that you give more examples of UCM in real life, and see how they interact with the formulas you listed.

=] said...

I liked this powerpoint because the pictures made it very exciting for me to look at. There weren't too many words on each page making it easier to understand. It could have had example problems or something but otherwise it is a very understandable powerpoint. It followed the how to make a powerpoint thing because each slide doesnt have too much stuff on it.

chucknorris said...

THe information was given in a very straight forward manner, making it easy to learn from.

I enjoyed the pictures and thought that it was engaging to use diagrams.

Some of the words blended with the backround which was annoying but it was not that bad.

Yes as it contained engaging pictures, did not put to many words on the page at once and seemed to make an attempt at humor.

pretty labs

wucha-gona-do-about-it said...

yea the first couple of slides we kinda hard to read becuase of the background but other than that it was ok
nothing special

BK said...

I liked the first presentation (ucm 1)
1. It was successful because it used a lot of images instead of words, and images are easier to understand.
2. I liked the images that they used of circular things
3. Something that could be improved was the fact that there were some slides that had a lot of words on them, and the color of the font mixed in too well with the background making it a little hard to read.
4. I think that this presentation was consistent with the expectations in how to make a PowerPoint assignment because there were original backrgrounds for each slide and the slides were a lot more interesting and easier to read than in the past project.

ukiboy812 said...

I really liked your Presentation. i agree with john smith when they said to give more real life examples. One more thing, in some of the slides, you used whiter lettering and it got lots in some of the backgrounds, like i couldn;t really read it, but very nice.

Greggles said...

I really liked this presentation because of all of the pictures that were used, and they were all related to the project and very interesting. I would suggest not using a full picture such as the slide with the trees because it made the writing hard to read.

Aaronburr said...

In my humble opinion I though that the presentation worked well. It had images that jumped out at you which helped me pay attention. Also, it wasn't too wordy.
I liked the images the most probably, they helped me stay interested.
Sometimes however, the text was difficult to read and the sentences didn't make much sense.
Overall, the style was generally consistent. There were a few slides that looked a bit unorganized. And as I said, the text was occasionally difficult to read. However, I liked it.

TheMoonIsALie said...

1. This presentation was successful due to the colors used, along with the diagrams that really drew people in. It had a lot of good information, yet did not try to cram it all into a small place. It was very well-done in that regard.

2. I thought it was creatively done, and I liked it for the reasons stated above.

3. For a few of the slides, the writing was hard to read. I did not really care for having to focus in and concentrate on what it said -- that is just not very efficient for me.

4. I thought this was consistent with what was stated in the example PowerPoint, definitely. It had a lot of pictures to draw people in, and it was nice and simple. Well done.

miley said...

I thought this presentation was very well made. There were a lot of pictures and not too many words so it wasn't boring. It gave us good information as well. However, I think some of the slides could have been a little neater because sometimes it was hard to follow what was being stated.

2468 said...

I like this presentation because of the pictures and the colors used. The diagrams also helped to understand what the person was trying to teach. Some of the slides had a lot of writing on them and sometimes the writing was hard to see with the background.

Kronos said...

I liked this presentation because it was easy to follow. It was sometimes hard to read the words as they blended into the background. This presentation was consistent with the guidelines set by "how to make a powerpoint" as it did follow the guidelines and flowed smoothly.

123456789 said...

I thought this was the best of the UCM presentations. It was very graphic, and there were not that many words on each slide. There were also diagrams to help explain the topic being shown. At some points, however, a couple of the slides became very busy with lots of formulas and writing. Overall, it was the easiest to follow.

geoff said...

I liked this project because there were not that many words on each slide which made it easy and quick to read but still got the point across. I liked how there were a lot of pictures to help show what was being described. I think some of the words blended too much with the pictures which made it hard to read at times but overall I could understand it. I think this project follows the rules on how to make a powerpoint.

Cheesehead said...

I like this powerpoint becasue the pictures and diagrams get the point across. It couyld be cleaned up a little more, but overall this is a good powerpoint

lez said...

I liked this presentation because it was easy to read. The first page caught my attention and made me want to look at it. The slides were very neat and did not have too much information. Sometimes though the words were hard to read because they blended in with the backround. I think this followed the expectations.

Tom Halsall said...

I think what initially made this presentation successful was the vivid imagery which kind of drew me into reading it more in depth. I liked how they worked in the text to the imagery and clarified equations.

the only thing that I think could be improved is that there were a couple wordy slides that could have been cut down but the rest of them were fairly consice and cogent and got the point across well.

I think for the most part they conveyed a working knowledge of how to make a powerpoint since the utilized imagery that corresponded well to thier points as well as bold equations that were clear and easy to understand and for the most part they contained the information in a consice and to the point manor

1234567891011 said...

I thought that this was a good presentation however, it was hard to read the text with some of the pictures. Other than that, the info was good and helped me out. I also liked that you got a little creative with it.

Fergeson said...

this project is successful because its very colorful and has engaging pictures that force the viewer to read the words around them. I really liked how the slides didn't have a picture slapped in the middle the slides were the pictures. one thing to improve on would be when using a blue background instead of thin black letters use bold orange letters so the words are easy to read and stick out. Its no completely consistent with the how to make a powerpoint at some times the words are too small or too many, this could be fixed by making more slides with less ideas on each of them.

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pl3144 said...

This presentation was very weel put together. It flowed smoothly from slide to slide and was very informative. The use of examples really helped for the reader to understand the info. One thing that could be improved would be to make the text stand out more against the pictures. This presentation followed the powerpoint guidelines well with just the right amount of text, good pictures, and great examples. Good job!

Gepppettto said...

This presentation was very clear and neatly organized without being boring. The diagrams were very helpful and the pictures kept my attention on the powerpoint. It had all of the important information and not one slide had too many words. So it was consistant with the expectations stated in "how to make a power point" in that way.
At times the writing was hard to see on the backround. For example, the white writing on the lightist backround was annoying to read, but besides that I thought this powerpoint was the best.

306e91st said...

I liked this project alot. I really enjoyed the artwork and graphics and thoght it really made this presentation go a step above the rest.

kingsley said...

This presentation used a small amount of text and helpful pictures, equations and diagrams to correctly display all the aspects of UCM. Though they could have balanced the color better in some slides, the presentation was still brilliant. It was consistent with "how to make a powerpoint" because of the big lettering but small amount of text and catchy images.

Myra Hindley said...

This presentation is successful because it is visually pleasing while informative. I'm a very viual learnr so it was able to keep my attention with the colorful theme. It could have utilized a little more information but it doesnt matter, because all the informaton in it was completely accurate. This presentation is consistent with "how to make a powerpoint" because it isnt too cluttered with wording, it is gets the point across in a straight forward, simple manner. It is aesthetically pleasing with lots of pictures to enforce the point.

Anonymous said...

I really liked this powerpoint presentation. It had great visuals and really interesting format. I loved that it used easy definitions and still got the point across. It wasn't a boring run-of-the-mill power point and it was different and interesting.
Pictures were great, but sometimes a little distracting from the overall point.
Otherwise awesome.

Anonymous said...

This presentation is good because it looks pretty and it gives me good information. The colors helped my attention span I could focus on the information. All the information was accurate and helpful. It goes with the how to make a powerpoint because it isn't too wordy and it gets the point across.

Ethan G-S said...

This one was very good because it used a lot of easy to follow and attention holding pictures. It was consitant with that "Powerpoint" powerpoint.

earthworm jim said...

Very good, The amount of information summed up in such few words is nice, sparse text keeps people engaged (as shown in how to make a powerpoint) nice pictures keeps the eye on the presentation. My only complaint is that certain slides should have had different text colors, some slides became a chore to read.

betty said...

This is a great presentation. Really. It is very attractive and enjoyable to read and look at. It had a great style. It would have been a slight more helpful if it was more organized information.